“Sentimientos in Waves” Collection Series – Abandoned

Hey ya’ll!

This post is the last of three poetry pieces that I am sharing for this collection! For this assignment, we were again asked to play with form. This one was probably the hardest one to write because I was kind of running out of ideas haha. I would love to know your thoughts on it! Tell me what you think of the form and the content. I really hope you all enjoy this piece!

Let’s get started!


Bright, brown petals

Fall on down

Flutter and sway

To dusty glass

Lonely stems remain

In cracked vases

Disaster has come

Silence is permanent

His shoes are

Still tucked away

In dark corners

Of shared closets

A broken key

Lays alone, discarded

So that’s it for this post! Please let me know what you think in the comments! I really hope you all enjoyed it 🙂

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